Fixation (first draft)

Feedback
Add tagline with dis-equilibrium.
Night vision effect on camera/ recording shot.
More fast paced editing and a range of shots more shakey than static.
Voice over.
Music changed at the end.
Sound effects.

Planning - Script

Scene 1
Lewis: Hi, I'm Lewis.
Selma: Hi, I'm Selma.

Scene 2 - dating montage.

Scene 3
Selma: So I met this guy and he's so charming. I cant stop thinking about him.

Scene 4
Lewis: Hey, would you like a lift home?
Selma: Yeah sure, thanks.

Scene 5 - stalking montage.
Selma: Please help me...